Legislative drafting

Bill Drafting Workbench

First-draft bill language in Legislative Counsel style β€” templates, a guided builder, and an amendment formatter. The workbench drafts the shape of the idea; Legislative Counsel drafts the law.

Drafting aid β€” not a substitute for Legislative Counsel review

Everything this workbench produces is a draft for counsel review, never filed legislation. Only a legislator can author a bill, and only the Office of Legislative Counsel drafts the official version with its digest and vote keys. Review every draft against current law on leginfo before it goes anywhere.

Step 1

Template library

Six starter forms in Legislative Counsel style, each with drafting notes. Bracketed text [like this] is yours to replace. Click "Use template" to load one into the workbench output.

Step 2

The workbench

Build a bill skeleton from a guided form, or format amendments to pasted bill text. Output appears on the right β€” save it, export it, or generate a Word doc.

Guided bill builder

Amendment formatter

Paste introduced bill text, add strike/insert instructions, and get amendments in standard committee form β€” plus the text as amended.


Your draft will appear here. Use a template, the guided builder, or the amendment formatter.

Saved drafts

Private to this browser (localStorage key silobbyist_drafts_v1). Nothing leaves your machine.

Reference

LC conventions β€” quick reference

From kb/drafting-conventions.md, compiled into Goldie's brain at build. Full cheat-sheet with sources lives in the knowledge base.

Style rules

  • Enacting clause (verbatim): "The people of the State of California do enact as follows:" β€” Gov. Code Β§9501.5
  • First section is SECTION 1.; the rest are SEC. 2., SEC. 3.
  • Amend: "Section ___ of the ___ Code is amended to read:" β€” then the full section as it will read
  • Add: "Section ___ is added to the ___ Code, to read:"; Repeal: "Section ___ of the ___ Code is repealed."
  • Title names the code section(s) + a relating clause; must convey the bill's actual scope (Joint Rules)
  • Bills are presumed prospective β€” retroactivity needs an explicit statement of intent

Pitfalls that kill drafts

  • Double-amending: two bills, same section, same session β€” the later-enacted (higher chapter) prevails on conflict (Gov. Code Β§9605). Draft double-jointing language.
  • Urgency: 2/3 of membership each house (54 Assembly / 27 Senate), section and bill voted separately by rollcall β€” and an urgency bill can't create/abolish offices or grant franchises/special privileges (Cal. Const. art. IV, Β§8(d)).
  • Germaneness: amendments must be germane to the bill's subject; the presiding officer decides, subject to appeal by a majority of the house.
  • "New bill" amendments (changed subject) get re-referred out of the Senate under Rule 29.10.
  • Gut-and-amend must still clear the 31-day and 72-hour print rules.
Need letters, testimony, or talking points instead? That's the Drafting Studio β€” this workbench is for bill text. Drafting outputs are starting points, not legal advice.